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Clara
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since 2000-05-27
Posts 21
England, but moving to Sweden this year

0 posted 2000-06-12 01:06 PM


Come
Walk with me
Through the garden of our minds
Revisiting flowering ideas
Retesting opinions more defined

Come
Laugh with me
At jokes and our strange ideas
Poking gentle fun at each other
Mocking ourselves with a smile

Come
Sing with me
The words yet unwritten
Trying tunes that might fit
To our moods and emotions

Come
Dance with me
To the music in our heads
Seeking our own rhythm
To match and fit with one another

Come
Love with me
Fan the flames to burn brighter
Keeping our fire and our heat
So the dream never ends

Come
Be with me
Without fancy ideas or clever words
Just quiet time together
Content to just 'be'

Come
Thats it
Just come
Thats enough
To change the world


Clara


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