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Someeone Help Him

Joshua Garrett
Junior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 21

0 posted 2000-06-06 03:39 AM

Sitting aloft this bridge far away,
I see a man who needs no help,
I see no problems or worries,
I just see him writing.

After sitting here for an hour,
He always writes with that black pen,
All he does is think of his love,
He can't stop writting.

The pen still empty,
He is still writing,
Someone help him,
And take that pen away.

- Joshua Garrett

please tell me the truth about how you think...if you are reading this one please read the others that I have written this early morning. This might sound stupid, but I can't sleep...I am moving away from my first love and haven't slept in 11 days and can't stop writing to her or about her. I don't know what to do.

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