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Grace
Junior Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 19

0 posted 2000-05-17 09:18 AM

Summer's here it's time to run,
Let's go outside and
have some fun.
Let's take the children
to the shore and
Make memories that last,
Forever more.
We'll ride the waves,
Play in the sand,and
Walk the beach hand in hand.
As the sun is setting low,
we'll pack our things its
Time to go.As the day comes to
an end,I hope we've made at least
one friend.
M.G.M.

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[This message has been edited by Grace (edited 06-03-2000).]

Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

1 posted 2000-05-17 09:13 PM

Grace,
Good poem on the fun of the beach and ocean and being with your friends is how I percepted it.

Grace
Junior Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 19

2 posted 2000-05-20 08:20 AM

Thanks lonely poet for taking the time
to read my poem,and you perceved it right.

Grace
Junior Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 19

3 posted 2000-05-20 08:22 AM

Thanks lonely poet for taking the time
to read my poem,and you percepted it right.

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