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Chico
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since 2000-02-10
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0 posted 2000-04-24 10:20 PM


Did you ever love someone,
  even though it hurt to?
Did you ever love sommeone,
  that's all your heart could do?
Did you ever love someone,
  that did'nt love you?
Did you ever love someone,
  Who never knew?

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Kirsty24
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since 2000-03-24
Posts 40
Australia
1 posted 2000-04-25 01:23 AM


Just have to tell you.... YES!!!!!

 

Kurly
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since 2000-04-21
Posts 48

2 posted 2000-04-25 02:15 PM


I havto admit I have several loves that don't know it, great poem with a deep meaning.
Chico
Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 67

3 posted 2000-04-26 02:57 PM


Well thanks all for responding, I was not sure how this one was, because of how short it was, but I guess it gets the question across. thanks again..

                         -Chico

7
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 113
Amherst, MA, USA
4 posted 2000-04-26 06:08 PM


it reminds me of a song, but i'm not sure what... not accusing you of plagiarism, but did you get the idea from a song?
Chico
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 67

5 posted 2000-04-26 08:59 PM


7, thanks for replying, and to answer your question, No, I didn't, at least not consciensly, I don't even think I have heard a song like that, but hey who knows.. thanks again. take care now..

                       -Chico

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