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zorkon65
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since 2000-04-22
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0 posted 2000-04-22 10:46 PM


this is a poem/song it speaks for it self its about love found and lost

Lets talk
By Charlie herring

Sometimes I lie
When I look you in the eye
And say I don’t love you
And look to the sky

Now the sky is growing dark
The clouds rolling in
The storm is moving this way
And when this is over I might be dead

Baby we need to talk
Sit down eye to eye
And listen while I talk

Now the storm is here
Can you hear me over the wind?
It’s screaming all around us distracting to the last
How long can it last

Now the wind is pulling you one way
And pulling me the other
I try to scream I love you
But it’s drowned out by the thunder

Baby we need to talk
Sit down eye to eye
And listen while I talk

I look for you day and night
But never found you again
Now I have to go on living
Or I will grow dead within

I can to go on living
With the feelings I did not say
The ones I will keep secret all my day
And the ones I sent your way



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