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LenMcC1
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0 posted 2000-04-21 11:09 PM


Without Much Of Anything


I Sit here all alone
Nothing seems to matter
No calls on the phone
Time makes me sadder
Lights are off all across
Could I be the only one?
Maybe it’s my loss
Maybe the world I shouldn’t shun

I take a glance back at my life
I’m so sedated
And the pictures are all faded
But so is my life
My friend’s asleep
But soon he’ll awake
I ‘m so excited
I cannot wait

I’ve harmed so many
In so little time
Lost all my licenses
Lost all my rights
I’ve been asked to leave
By the ones I love
But don’t I need
Don’t I deserve love?

My friend’s awake
Now I can numb
All of my bitter feelings
Regret, hate and love
But hope I still have
Though maybe I don’t
But to tell myself this
Is what gets me through


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