navwin » Archives » Critical Analysis #1 » rewording
Critical Analysis #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic rewording Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Darin
Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-04-13 05:29 AM


I think i will reword this poem so the reader can better understand the message


© Copyright 2000 Darin Maner - All Rights Reserved
Darin
Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 17

1 posted 2000-04-13 05:31 AM


opps sorry about that
i tried to post that under my poem
im not sure what happened

Ted Reynolds
Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331

2 posted 2000-04-13 12:13 PM


or, to rephrase

sorry about that
i tried to reword my poem
but now it's all gone

(these days everything becomes a haiku in my mind -- sorry about that.)

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Critical Analysis #1 » rewording

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary