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Tony Di Bart
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0 posted 2000-03-26 12:33 PM


(THis is short but think about it)

You only die once
today
But, you will always die
Tomorrow.

© Copyright 2000 Anthony Di Bartolomeo - All Rights Reserved
jbouder
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1 posted 2000-03-27 11:43 AM


Okay, Tony, so you've demonstrated that you know how to give Jim a headache trying to figure this one out.    Just kidding.  If by "die" you are talking about "death-die" then I am having difficulty getting your message.  If by "die" you mean "rolling a die" as in "rolling dice" then I can sort of see what you are saying here.  What am I missing?

Jim

captaincargo
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2 posted 2000-03-27 12:09 PM


Okay, does this mean. If you are in the present(such as today), you would think to yourself, "I'll only die once". But you always think that it won't be "today", it will be "tomorrow"??

If that ain't it then I'm "dead" in the water.  

Cap.

 Cap. Carg.

Tony Di Bart
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3 posted 2000-03-28 02:07 AM


Captiancargo

Sort of. You can only die once.  Therefore, you can only die today once. That is there will be no day after the day you die. As for the second part there is always a day before the day you die. THerefore you will always die on a tommorow.  

Sort of a backwards way of looking at it.

See Ya


captaincargo
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4 posted 2000-03-28 02:32 PM


Oh, cool. Now I getcha.  

Just like looking through glass now.

Cap.

 Cap. Carg.

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