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Chico
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 67


0 posted 2000-03-17 12:37 PM


My only crime !!!


I know I'd die for you;
  if just given the chance.
just hoping that I might;
  catch the slightest little glance.
And in that last instant;
  before life and death.
That you would be there present,
  To hear my last breath.
And that on you lips;
  Would be my name.
As your tear drips;
  on my quivering frame.
That you would hold me tight;
  And ask me why.
And tell me It's not right;
  That I should die.
But in the wanning time;
  I would Smile and be tough.
Knowing that my only crime;
  Was not loving you enough...

I love you Avei...

  


[This message has been edited by Chico (edited 03-17-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Chico - All Rights Reserved
Diana B
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since 2000-03-10
Posts 97

1 posted 2000-03-17 04:45 AM


ah love...never ceases to amaze me. eludes, deludes and when perfect soars the soul to the ends of insanity in universal images.
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