In the Light of Love Above

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In the Light of Love Above

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

0 posted 2000-02-18 12:44 PM

In the Light of Love Above

Flowers forever fragrant, dance in bloom
When Heaven’s glittery gate opens
Birds beautiful harmony whistle their tune
In the light of love above

Hourglass of sand, no longer we will know
In picturesque soft meadows of time
Endless breezes of summer’s show
In the light of love above

Forever souls of destiny in sunsets blush
Colours radiant rainbow in June
Beats for eternity in hearts humble hush
In the light of love above

Marina Feb 16/2000

This is only the second poem I have ever written, so any help would be appreciated.

Thanks,
Marina

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