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Holden
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since 1999-12-23
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Brighton East, Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2000-02-10 07:30 AM


Some people are critisized for their emotions, I ask why?
Is it a crime to be TOO emotional, laugh a lot or even cry?
Without my emotions I may as well lay down and die.

You can tell when I'm happy, you will know when I'm mad,
You might even find a tear in my eye when I am sad.
However, I can hide my emotions which can make me glad.

An emotionless person is without a pulse or a life,
Will have a terrible time finding their perfect wife.
Most likely will live their life in a terrible strife.

Or maybe not, because they are without that emotion,
Which means they will never attempt to cross the ocean
To find their one true love because they have no devotion.

So, never critisize people for the emotions they show.
I'd rather be dead than without them, I hope you know.
My emotions are what makes me live my life with a happy glow.



 'I once picked a daisy's petals searching for an answer. I went through 10 daisy's before getting the answer I was looking for...I love you.'

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