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thumper4him
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 27
Newport Beach Ca

0 posted 2000-02-06 08:57 PM


                Mine
I listen
I talk
We converse
I cry
You console
We think about eachother
You care so much what I am doing
I care so much what you've done
You are mine
You are my best friend
You are my confidant
You are mine
And I am yours
I will always stand up for you
And you will guide me through
You are exactly the same but everchanging
You are no longer some distant object
You are my reality
I will share you
For I know that you will not detract from our love
I will show you to others
So they may see a part of me
For you are mine
My guilding light
My closet bud
My peaceful warrior
My newest addition
I love you
Because
You are mine
You are mine
You gave a part of yourself to me
And I now hold a promise in my heart
That you died on calvary that day
Not only for everyone else but me too
I know that if I was alone on this earth
I would still have you
For you are mine
My savior


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