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hoppy
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0 posted 2000-02-05 11:55 AM


touched you once
loved you twice
watched you more
cold as ice

seen you there
your not here
show no emotion
heart stand still

see your eyes
they grow dim
wish you wouldn't
stand by him

--Written by: Hoppy
2-4-00



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