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Kevin Taylor
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since 1999-12-23
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near Vancouver, BC, Canada

0 posted 2000-01-26 12:22 PM


.
Spoons
c-d-lick-k-k

pots/pans
b-bang-ng-ng
bowng b boawng
Hey!

-ey!
lids
CRSH-INGGG

Hey ng ng-ng b-ba-wnng Hey!

Hey!
HeyboangHecd-ba-b-yonnHey!
HeyowngHeyboangdeclick (SHiNGHey!)
Heyang-b-bang-c-dlick bongHey!
c-Hey-c-baowngSHINGGbonng-nging-Hey!

 Kevin

"Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you got there."


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Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA
1 posted 2000-01-26 10:05 AM


Kevin,

Not sure I follow where you might be taking this, but it surely does look and sound like a busy kitchen. If that was your goal, you have succeeded, my friend. And, it has the added benefit of being in no way archaic  

Hey, look! I got to be first this time.

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 Pete

     What terms shall I find sufficiently simple in their sublimity --
     sufficiently sublime in their simplicity --
     for the mere enunciation of my theme?
          Edgar Allan Poe




[This message has been edited by Not A Poet (edited 01-26-2000).]

DesertJana
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 19
USA
2 posted 2000-01-26 10:49 AM


Sounds like the pre-dinner symphony at my house! Excellent work poet...I can hear the crash of symbols filling the void of conversation.
Kevin Taylor
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since 1999-12-23
Posts 185
near Vancouver, BC, Canada
3 posted 2000-01-26 01:40 PM


Hi
You can't just "read" this one. You have to actually make the sounds. And if you do, you'll end up singing. There's a reason to the madness.
CRSH-INNNG!


 Kevin

"Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you got there."


patchoulipumpkin
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since 2000-01-01
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Bermuda
4 posted 2000-01-26 01:44 PM


very cool..
merely_a_jester
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 67
Arkansas... that's all you get
5 posted 2000-01-26 01:53 PM


first off i think that this is very inventive, though i'm still not sure of what to make of it.  i do want to thank you for the expression my roommate gave me when i tried to read it out loud, it was well worth the read

merely_a_jester

 Are scarecrows just like men, and do you hold
That a false coin is just as good as gold?

Moliere, "Tartuffe"

jbouder
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since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534
Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash
6 posted 2000-01-26 01:58 PM


Kevin:

This was fun.    Not as fun as "i, I ain't" but, hey, they all can't be that good.    Later.

Jim

Earthtones
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since 2000-01-18
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7 posted 2000-01-27 12:13 PM


Fantastic!!!!!!!!
warmhrt
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since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563

8 posted 2000-01-27 12:41 PM


This ... gave me the kind of shivers you get when you hear nails scrape across a chalkboard.  I almost covered my ears.  

Nice work,
warmhrt


[This message has been edited by warmhrt (edited 01-27-2000).]

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