Critical Analysis #1 |
J.B.SR Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 29Seattle area |
[This message has been edited by J.B.SR (edited 01-07-2000).] |
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Tim Gouldthorp Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 170 |
The sentiment is clear, and it flows nicely. Maybe consider changing 'them' to 'those' in the 9th line. |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
Beautiful poem...very touching |
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