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Holden
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since 1999-12-23
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Brighton East, Victoria, Australia

0 posted 1999-12-30 10:25 PM


Too nervous to make my move so I waited
Should I or shouldn’t I, I contemplated
Now it doesn’t matter ‘cuz I took too long
My feelings won’t fade ‘cuz they are too strong
So I sit and regret since I couldn’t decide
I’m embarrassed now should I run and hide
Or should I try and forget put it in the past
If I wait even longer will my feelings last
Maybe I should make my move even though I’m late
Make my move to see if I can change fate
Probably can’t, probably won’t, so I sit some more
Hoping that fate will coming knocking at my door
I should have reacted with a faster pace
I’m too slow in life so I lost the race
Never took a chance and I’ll always regret
Never took this chance and I’ll never forget


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