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jstevens Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 11austin,texas |
excellence given in admiration invades, like fingerprints smudging glass. everythings not so clear any more. melted emotion died into puddles of the lost and found (I am lost but I am not found) peering from my tower balanced with everything I don't need to be higher to see the problem it's all too obvious. secure me, let me feel my strength uncover me from lonliness. my instincts are fading I'm confused by what's real. wash my eyes, untangle me from this net that deprives me of my own happiness. erase this drawn smile, make it real... I want to be real. let my picture develop for all to see no unbloomed flowers left to die in me. maybe I'm real,just wanting to be clued in on how to be fake... too many artificial flavoring to be natural. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I think by the end of the poem, you realize for yourself just what kind of person you are! Remember to be yourself among else! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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