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Yoin
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I have been trying to expand my range of writing and have decided to try some different Japanese styles. Your thoughts and views are desired.. Yoin

haibun

small steps taken, hearts touching, spring waters running-great mountains shedding winter's dreams. a freshness, a beginning, a thaw of winter

the wind blows her hair
in dark eyes and clever smile
secrets just for me

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i like this style, it's refreshing to see a short poem that still leaves so much for the reader to think about. a new beginning, the secrets of a mysterious woman. it's unique.
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