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Littlewings
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since 1999-09-19
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0 posted 1999-11-24 07:26 AM

Dimmer , still than you were before.
Lonliness seeps into every pore.
Broken acreage spans over your heart.
The sunlight of a friendly day , refuses to come and walk your way.
Every tear I cry just runs and runs.
The words that cut , once again will stunn.
And make you tired of these dreary days.
In all their grey familiar ways.
In the ashy traces of your wanton stability ,
Lies the ways of sense and sensibility.
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roxane
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since 1999-09-02
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1 posted 1999-11-24 04:20 PM

erin this was so great except for the "sense and sensiblity" i saw that movie in 1997 and it wasn't any better than the boring book. but that may just be my opinion. anyways, awesome poem with incredible rhyme. i love it.
roxane
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2 posted 1999-11-26 09:41 PM

this is a really good one and i'd like to see some more replies on it. so please take a look at it if you haven't. thanks.
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