Jimryu (Tanka/Senryu/Acrostic/Pun Hybrid)

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Critical Analysis #1

Jimryu (Tanka/Senryu/Acrostic/Pun Hybrid)

jbouder
Member Elite

since 1999-09-18

Posts 2534
Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash

0 posted 1999-11-22 01:14 PM

Thoughtful construction.
Oversized wheels lend balance,
Nigh-invulnerable steel skin.
Knowledge, foresight, quality
And bright, yellow paint.

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Jim

"If I rest, I rust." -Martin Luther

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-11-23 10:34 PM

this one is definatly differnt, can you teach me how to write like this, could you email me and tell me how?? im quite interested, thanks!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

Brad
Member Ascendant

since 1999-08-20

Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea

2 posted 1999-11-24 02:06 AM

I for one enjoyed this quite a bit. Love those trucks.

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