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CCat
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since 1999-11-15
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0 posted 1999-11-15 08:25 PM


EATING MY THESAURUS

Nonchalance with surreptitious detection
Absorbing the lambent aroma of epicurean flavor,
Glancing around while reasoning the feasibility
A better meal may stumble onto the bait.

Bowing to the source of the redolent whiff,
Slowly nearing the piquance of the first taste,
A reverent awareness of the sanguinary struggle
Causes pause with one more meditative sniff.

Decorously plucking a nugget to usher in the taste,
Savoring a continuing anticipation of the bait's appeal,
(Indeed, such a prize cannot go unchallenged for long!
Atmospheric spice to surround the purrrsued delicacy.)

A crushing thrust impressed with Lion's heritage
Vehemently impaling the puncture through to the soul
Assuring final destruction of life's lingering essence
While implanting expropriation's consumption authority.

Momentary rumination conjuring maceration's brew
Envisages the domination and utilization of destiny
Restoring possession of the gift of life back to the Unseen
As if Provenience were in need of recycled resources.

French Kissing My Thesaurus

Cheek caressing and neck nuzzling
With a sybaritic dreamscape unfolding,
A savorous saunter into reverie
Pursuing enchantment's lure....

Amorous delectability disolving gravity,
The touch of lips subjugating time,
Enveloping concupiscence's ardor
To linger in anticipation of revelation.

Osculation is my desideratum!
Felicitous fervor for enamoration
Invoking dalliance with a spark,
Blossoming into ebullient effulgence!

The succulent serum entrancing
Empathic pruriency into the embrace,
Vivifying amativeness with cognizance,
A noesis with euphoric beatitude.

Light From My Thesaurus

Dancing electric incandescence enchants,
Negotiating on and off with a swagger -
Deception's delight igniting illumination
Captivating caprice to instigate impression.

Embracing the shadow's shimmer fully
Painting in fantasy's missing details,
A dance floor for salacious leaps of predisposition
Spawning flirtatious faith in reflected coruscation.

Inspiration powered by the enthusiasm of a votary,
Light is the path to the seed of verisimilitude,
Source of joy's peace and the sustenance of goodwill,
Dissolving the sword of umbra with evidence.

Consumption grappling with metalic endurance
Artificial light is functionalism's nourishment,
Embezzlement of the future and ignorance of the past,
Capitalizing the profit of the moment with blind faith.

Infatuation with the allurement of an actinic vampire
Shepherds the congregation through their chimera
With artful blandishments and amorous shading,
Passionately focusing on endearing effulgence.

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