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Renee
Junior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 18
langhorne, PA 19047

0 posted 1999-11-14 12:16 PM


If you reach out to me,
I will pull you in.

If you crawl into my arms,
I will never let you fall.

If you whisper in my ear,
I will listen to everything you have to say.

If you open your eyes to me,
I will show you everything you need to see.

If you open your ears to me.
I will tell you everything you need to hear.

If you open your heart to me,
I will never let it be cold.

I will keep you warm,
Just as you have kept me warm.

While you showed me,
Everything I needed to see.

As I listened to you tell me,
Everything I needed to hear.

You showed me what love is,
And taught me how easy it is to fall into
Each time I fell into your arms.

So now I reach out to you,
To whisper in your ear to say,

"Thank you" for sharing your love with me,
And teaching me the true definition of
What the words, I Love You, really mean.


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Linda Renee

© Copyright 1999 Renee - All Rights Reserved
Brad
Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea
1 posted 1999-11-18 04:54 AM


This might make an interesting song but you've wet my appetite for a good story and then didn't deliver. Don't suppose you might want to expound a little more on the background to this piece?
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