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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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working on a chorus of song.. need a few more lines to make the following pattern. If you would be so kind.. (smile) You're something to write home about baby there's something about the way we hear the same notes (1234) laugh at the same jokes (12345) you smile when I smile (12345) never a dull moment with you so.. I need some suggestions for the ending repeating chorus.. for the numbered parts. I know you guys can think of some great stuff. Mind helping me out?? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
redwriter....perhaps Q&A would be a more appropriate forum for this one rather than in critcal? |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
oopsy |
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