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where is brad? (an acrostic)
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where is brad? (an acrostic) |
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
We all know, Here resides, Eagerly critquing, Rather, I say ravashing Everyone's poems, one named Brad. I say though, where is he? Seen not have I much of his work, But I mean not to offend. Rather I mean to draw him out, And hear a bit of his verse. Do post again soon, Brad. You've got to comment on how bad this one is, and I know that you will.  ------------------ "Come night, come darkness, for you cannot come too soon or stay too long in such a place as this." Charles Dickens roxane [This message has been edited by roxane (edited 11-02-1999).] |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
What does He know anyway?!? Everytime he Ravages my work I wonder if he is just Enjoying himself or If he really thinks my poems Stink. But I suppose it takes a smart a** to Recognize a smart a** And Brad, we are truly a dying breed. Don't change a thing Brad, atleast until I write something you like. Really good idea, Roxanne. Our mutual friend will appreciate this, he will surely not regard you as a Xanthippe (wow, that took some digging!) And, when he reads this, he will Not be able to resist a smart-alecky comment ... He may Even threaten to sue! Good job, Roxane. Keep them coming. [This message has been edited by jbouder (edited 11-02-1999).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Laughs, now how can I ever critique this one. Cute roxanne....got the acrostic going well and you brought a smile to me face, so can't be all that bad  Ruth |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
Yes, it is a horrible poem. You've twisted all the words to fit your acrostic instead of working to get the two to work together. But what's even worse is the topic you chose. Can anyone think of a more boring topic than some balding drunk who thinks he knows how to read and write poetry, who spends most of his time telling people what to do when half the time he doesn't know himself? The only good thing about this guy is the woman he married (I fooled her, you know). There are far more important and interesting things to write about than pompous, insecure, airheaded, little old me. I loved it. Thanks guys, Brad |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
LOL...LOVE IT...GREAT FUN ROXANNE and a very creative play...I never do acrostics...so I admire the effort truly! |
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
Berated Ridiculed Abashed Dejected yeah i say that pretty much sums up my feelings after brad's critique. |
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Littlewings Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 62 |
Showbiz...You've summed up my life.Remember the pasty blue sky?Great Poem on the real.(hah) |
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rachana.s Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 55madras,tamil nadu,India |
roxane back again with the acrostic are you? this one sure was cool. Even the bald, pompous brad must have enjoyed it. do continue rachi |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
balding, balding, Rachi -- it's not gone yet. -- and I love being the center of attention. |
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
Brad Apparently I was unaware, Like most others of your Disorder: hair loss? Is it true? Never, I don't believe it Going, going, gone? |
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