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A Night of Pure Passion!
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A Night of Pure Passion! |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
A Night of Pure Passion! I went to your house last night and nervously knocked on your door. I saw a shadow through the window and my heart raced at the thought of you. The door slowly opened and I felt a bit of faint. It was you, rising from the black room with your hair all a mess. You were dressed in shorts and a T-shirt your night time attire. You looked like you had been asleep for quit some time. I felt awful, waking you from a sleep, I know how important it is to you. I had to see you though. One more lonesome night would kill me. You invited me in, and asked me if I wanted a drink. I said yes, but also, I said I wanted to talk to you about days gone by. You agreed, and we sat down at the kitchen counter and slow drank. I was nervous about being there. I had this feeling that I was not wanted. Your hospitality was sincere, and you even began talking first. You have no idea how much that meant to me. We talked about old times, the good and the bad. We talked about recent times, how you are, and how I am. Time flew by so fast. I wish that night had lasted forever. But as I awoke the next morning, I was laying next to you, in your bed. And that meant the world to me. I hope it also meant the world to you. ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel |
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merlynh Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411deer park, wa |
Well I don't know? You tricked me into reading this, but alas, there was no night of pure passion. Maybe it was implied. Or? Maybe I missed something? Merlyn |
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