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The Mountain |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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The mountain stands in majestic glory towering over lakes and pines snow resides on it's frozen peaks and boulders ring it's sides From a distance this mountain seems immobile and forever there but look closer and closer yet this mount is changing year by year Always moving, forever changing not from day to day the same like the lives of all the people no matter their heritage or name From a distance our lives seem steady not so, a closer look would say always moving, forever changing and we live on from day to day ------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Other than some rough rhyme in the first two stanzas, this piece is quite well-written. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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