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skysight
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since 1999-08-14
Posts 22


0 posted 1999-09-23 06:14 PM


Living Angel

Faded echoes across the sea.
Come here, closer, hold and comfort me.
Put your arms around me darling
Hold me tight my sweet, my angel.
My living angel.

Faded echoes across time.
Wordless song and tuneless rhyme.
Endless circles and broken chains
Hold me tight and break my reins.
I call my angel.

Faded echoes across my mind.
Phantom arms keep me safe in daily life.
Kisses, soft, now sweetly flutter in the wind.
I miss my angel.
My soulful angel.

Faded echoes across my life.
Dripping tears, joy, laughter, pain, sorrow, and strife.
Look to the future, sun shines bright ahead.
Past hold me back with moonlight calling please forget.
Forget my angel.

Faded echoes across the sky.
Soulless wonders still crying, asking why.
Hold me darling, dear, make me forget.
Keep me in your arms and fade away.
Sweet angel,
Living angel.

Faded echoes of my sighs.
Bouncing rhythms beating gracefully on high.
With your love I conquered demons of myself.
Hold me close my sweet bright star in moonlit night.
You are my angel,
My living angel.

[This message has been edited by skysight (edited 09-26-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 skysight - All Rights Reserved
donovan blue
Junior Member
since 1999-09-21
Posts 26
austin,tx,usa
1 posted 1999-09-25 09:41 PM


I liked this alot. Your feeling of longing and seperation tempered by the deepest of loves is clear and expressive. thanks!

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