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Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
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Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 1999-09-20 04:19 PM


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[This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 12-14-1999).]

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Lelly Shae
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 32

1 posted 1999-09-20 08:09 PM


I love your poem...it actually inspired me
to write one just now..(it's in progress as I write this) Anyway,I really like this kind
of poetry. You don't see much of it anymore. Now its all that free-verse,abstract stuff that's awfully ponderous to read. I mean,you
can be absract and stuff,that's cool,but
rhyming makes it read easy...and yours reads
easy and is really cool. Ignore my teen-age
slacker speak...imagine,a poet and can't
think of more "artistic" words.


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"Time flies like an arrow,fruit flies like
an arrow"--Groucho Marx

(ha ha)


Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
2 posted 1999-09-20 08:59 PM


There is only about 3 poems that I have that do not rhyme. I personally enjoy rhyming poetry better, they do flow easier and they sound nicer to me. I have more poetry in the Open Poetry #2 Forum if you are interested in reading any of it =u) Are you going to post this poem that you are workign on? If so I will look forward to reading it!
Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
3 posted 1999-09-20 09:50 PM


I think that your poem was wonderful. It was a very good insperation.
Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
4 posted 1999-09-21 02:59 AM


Thank you!
Lelly Shae
Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 32

5 posted 1999-09-21 03:56 PM


I will,but I'm not exactly done yet. It
will be up today.

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"Time flies like an arrow,fruit flies like
an arrow"--Groucho Marx

(ha ha)


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