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jesus
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since 1999-09-15
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menasha, wi, usa

0 posted 1999-09-16 05:28 AM


he knew it was wrong
but he did it all the same
he stuck the needle in his arm
there's no one else to blame
so he went to the doctor
and recieved his bad news
not the curse is upon him
he can't refuse
he went to the church
to confess all his sins
now he's swimming though life
like a fish without any fins
he has only a few years
to do the things he never did
having to grow up fast
so he doesn't die a kid
now living a full life
because it's going to be over soon
ending mournful and sad
like an old blues tune
his past is no longer
as his memory fades
cause he used a dirty needle
and is dying from aids




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