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Not to Love The Past

loyd168282
Junior Member

since 1999-09-10

Posts 12
lou,ky jefferson

0 posted 1999-09-16 03:18 AM

Young lady walks my path, eyes glazed straight. coldness wines in her. glimering lights closed in on her beauty, speak of the truth she said, tongue tided at the moment.I've lost full control, once she said.i"ve gaven all i have to be given left alone. no words committed, glowing blue eyes hit me in the face, body weakens.scared,lack of feelings.i"ve told you every last word,every last meaning detailed in to simple thoughts. i can love you again. hands pressed againts my hair, shaking uncontrollable coldness fills around (snow) its,on its way. betrayed by words you promised. a cold heart dies. loving to hate this feeling while you walk away good bye my sunshine forever, tears flow from her eyes "what"the hell have i done?

Littlewings
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 62

1 posted 1999-09-22 05:25 PM

vckdsjhfajiurh! I have no idea what to say (exept) you are so original . when i read your stuff-i know you have been there ,felt those feelings,cried those tears... heartfelt.

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