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loyd168282
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since 1999-09-10
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lou,ky jefferson

0 posted 1999-09-14 11:39 PM


awake at 3:am
seems to be loss of words.
the warm darkness cradles me as if i've never been held.
tears flow from my eyes to escape the daughter i never had.
infamous pretenders refuse to lose.
to only bleed empty to affection
life has become lifeless,
laughter is all so cheap.
my stomach hurts again,
clean me up before i frown.
my hands are blue from the air you take away.
hearts so often weaken.
insisting on others complaints.
married not for too long.
busting the canal for its soul reflection,
im a waste of space
we're all so dirty.
until the dying day,
we're all left as many shadows casting out to beam.

[This message has been edited by loyd168282 (edited 09-14-99).]

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roxane
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 505
us
1 posted 1999-09-14 11:49 PM


this is soooooo good

Littlewings
Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 62

2 posted 1999-09-19 01:46 AM


this is so very good and it feels good to know that people so in touch with things still walk this lonely earth.
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