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Okay, I'll explain upon your birthday to you people
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
I wrote this poem about a guy that I had a crush on for soooo long. On his birthday, I would want to give him something, but felt as though he didn't understand what I had already given him; time, effort, thoughts, poems, in essence me. It sort of recounts the feelings of having to just suffice to say, I would love you if you let me and get on with my own pathetic existence. The I have friends part is a sort of sarcastic thing that I threw in there to be like "all this stuff with you that makes me sad oh and I have friends, not really" Throughout the poem I try to at first focus on this guy and ask him typical birthday questions, but the later part would be my then wish to tell him how I had been for him, only him and make love me for perhaps my misery I don't know if it is a delight to be a temporary mystery or not, but I appreciate all the interest. KISSES ------------------ "Come night, come darkness, for you cannot come too soon or stay too long in such a place as this." Charles Dickens roxane |
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rogen of the night Junior Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 29 |
once again good now that i know who the poem is about it all fits into place.Keep it up.& keep making us think about it more and more. ------------------ The wise man is the storm prays God,not for safety from danger,but for deliverance from fear.It is the storm within which endangers him,not the storm without. ~~Ralh Waldo Emerson~~ |
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