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MEGAN
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since 1999-08-16
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Cottonwood, Ca United States

0 posted 1999-08-17 02:53 AM


Just like a down pour,
my tears just fall.
Confusion overwhelms my soul.
Am I strong enough to go on?
Each morning I wake up,
wanting so much to know,
but I am left in the dark.
Alone and confused,
I cry.
Not just a single tear,
but rather a waterfall.
Swimming in my own emotions,
I begin to sink.
Soon grasping for air,
I don't struggle to be free.
I just fall,
hit bottom.
Overtaken by life.
Not wanting to get up,
I lay on the water's floor.
I take my last glance at the world,
say my final prayer,
take my last and final breath.

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