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Critical Analysis #1
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VelvetLuna
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 10
Canada
0 posted 1999-07-22 12:43 PM

Stolen touches between flesh
let wandering eyes devour another
mutual breaths indefinitely held
within ever silence moonlight
only angels' surreal beliefs
dare lurk inside of them
until aches painfully release
slid underneath heaven's gates
resisting to be torn apart
appearing as delusional dreams
divinely engaged even still
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