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0 posted 1999-07-19 10:57 AM


Kind Sir

These gentle words I write to you Kind Sir, show nothing of the depth to which my heart can plunge. For what I wish to express cannot be written or spoken through the greatest of oratories, nor musings of a poet, but can be acknowledged in a single tear, or gentle sigh, which I give to you now.

Ah, what a perfect world it could be, Kind Sir, to be loved purely as I love thee. But alas, what pure love is perfect? Certainly not one that is forgotten, for my love would not be true if it was to be forgotten soon, I swear mine will not.

But I beg of you Kind Sir, if my devotion cannot be returned, then turn away from me, for my sorrowful heart is better forgotten, than denied.

~ Angela Erin Burke ~


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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

© Copyright 1999 Angela Erin Burke - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 1999-07-22 09:17 PM


someone critique me!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



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