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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas 
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KINDEST WORDS Those sorrowful words, You spoke to me, Telling me goodbye, I fear my dear, Were quite clear, But ne'er once did I cry. Those words my love, That you said with triumph, Hoping to cut me to the quick, I'm sorry to say, That on that fine day, I laughed so much I got sick! Those bitter words, You threw at me, Leaving me forever, Made me regret, Not one thing yet! And made my life all the better. Those sorrowful words, I say were the kindest, For when I remember that day, I know that for certain, I'm a much better person, For letting you go away. ~ Angela Erin Burke~ ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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M. Rivera Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 13San Francisco |
I loved your poem! I loved the way you expressed a woman's emotions of a man leaving them. It was great because men always seem to think that when they leave us we're at home crying, but in reality-they did us a favor-of course before we leave them, so they do their own favor. M.Rivera |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
lol, too true! ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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