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HM3
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since 1999-07-15
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0 posted 1999-07-18 12:33 PM


Memories tumbled with time
Emotions intertwined
Where yesterdays abound
Lost love forever found
Curving, tangled days
Younger, carefree ways

So many paths to choose
And where to leave these blues
That they could not be found
Nor turn my head around
Walking thru the haze
My heart my soul ablaze

Softened thru the years
Remembering - bitter tears
Accepting my own path
Thru joy, hope or wrath
Older - head is bowed
Learning life out loud

© Copyright 1999 Mark Ozee - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-07-18 01:01 PM


I liked this! I have no critique to give! It's good..it flows, it rhymes, it makes sense to me!

Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
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2 posted 1999-07-18 01:09 PM


This is what I call easy reading. And I like it.

[This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 07-18-99).]

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