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porowolf Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 16colo. spgs. , co, usa |
Heat Lips caressing one another Drinking love like nectar, So warm, so sweet -slowly. Slowly, Embracing themselves Passion increases, Forceful kisses. Two bodies pushing, Breathing Sweating sweetly -heavily- Forcing - froction - fire- Fire spreads between two people Burning. Hands tracing skin, Feeling, groping soft firm power. Discovering passion ignites their souls. Tender fingers caress her curves Pain insues from within. She weeps- He sleeps, waiting for another in his dreams. Lust |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
well, i am certainly not qualified to comment on free verse, but perhaps by pulling this up to the top someone else will do so  |
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