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Forlorn Angel
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0 posted 2021-03-17 01:59 AM


indescribable
is the best description
for something that
leaves you speechless

a break in the clouds
and you see clearly
for just a second
and it isn't
what you expected

yet it seemed so obvious
that maybe you should have
thought of it yourself

and you wonder what is so hard
about grasping what is
right in front of your eyes

thinking your just reaching
needing to get your
head out of the clouds

and then like a banner
floating in the wind

the image fads and you realize

this will always be
an untold tale.....

Swing high swing low sweet Chariot!!


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1 posted 2021-03-17 09:08 PM


Wow... a moment's clarity seized and swept away.  That moment of clarity doesn't reach too many people... even fewer stop to appreciate it, blessing or curse that may be.  Relate well to this one.
Forlorn Angel
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2 posted 2021-03-18 12:28 PM


Thank you ... Glad you can relate it's moments like that tell us that it just is what it is ya know?


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