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ethome
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0 posted 2021-01-27 08:03 PM



Be there when the lost is gone
Be there when the song lives on
Be there when the challenge spawns
Be there in the golden Dawn

Snow on the mountain wisdom's might
The fire below each day delights
Tomorrow's promise brings yesterday
The helping hand is here to stay

Be there when the pale horse rides
Be there where the soul denies
Be there as the never cries
Be there when the darkness dies

The breezes play the curtains whisper
The wine of life's no empty snifter
Look out on the sunlit street
Do not go gentle into defeat

true love never looks after it's own interests

© Copyright 2021 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Gunslinger
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1 posted 2021-01-30 05:51 PM


I like this very much. I requires a bit of thought, but that is a positive thing. Write on!
ethome
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2 posted 2021-01-30 08:24 PM


Thank you gunslinger, it's a short poem I have written about the pandemic situation actually and what everybody's facing. Thanks for dropping in to have a read
Temptress
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3 posted 2021-01-31 06:12 PM


Life just goes on around as if nothing is happening. It has to though. I catch myself wishing for "different" instead of normal. Nothing has ever been normal for me anyway. Apologies if these comments ramble.  Enjoyed!

"I know this love will tear me to pieces
I know his hands will dig up my secrets"

Meg Myers


ethome
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4 posted 2021-01-31 07:54 PM


Thanks, for the read, we are all affected one way or another. Definitely a challenge, and a challenge deeper than we have ever experienced before but determination is always a factor and a positive attitude wins battles especially sometimes even health battles.
Thanks M

true love never looks after it's own interests

Forlorn Angel
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5 posted 2021-02-01 10:27 PM


Beautiful...this rent spoke to me In love and war I have always retreated. Don't have time to play the game but your poem gave me inspiration. Willingness to fight for LOVE or walk away hoping the one you love is happy.
ethome
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6 posted 2021-02-02 04:17 PM


Thank you Angel I appreciate your comments.
Never give up!

true love never looks after it's own interests

Michael
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7 posted 2021-02-02 05:59 PM


Love the images you paint on the mind here.

"be there as the never cries"

Have spent my entire existence there.

ethome
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8 posted 2021-02-03 07:32 PM


Thanks michael, I appreciate the read and the nice comment we're all in this together thank you Eric
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9 posted 2021-02-04 09:25 PM


ethome...Enjoyed very much. Hopefully soon we can all smile and the sun will shine on all of us...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

NormalitxButterfly
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10 posted 2021-02-04 09:45 PM


i enjoyed your poem thanks for sharing

I leave to walk ahead, only to be lost
Even though I cannot see the end, I will leave on a journey at range, i think its alright if i disappear

ethome
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11 posted 2021-02-05 06:19 AM


Thanks Paul I appreciate the fact that you dropped in to have a look at this and make a nice comment.
We have to all be positive for the future nothing else will work!
Eric

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12 posted 2021-03-29 01:32 PM


A resounding call to remain positive, no matter one's age. Well done!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

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