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0 posted 2020-08-26 06:54 PM




Life of a Bluesman
By Paul Wilson

Learned  to play the blues in nineteen forty two
Jumped a freight train when I was fourteen
No money in my pockets
Just me and my daddy’s guitar
Played that guitar all night long

Wound up in Chicago cold and hungry
Only a guitar pick in my pocket
No money at all
Found an allnight diner
Cook let me sleep in the store room

Woke up the next morning
Thanked the cook and hit the streets
Playing on street corners…making some dough
Playing the blues…letting my soul bleed
Found a place to crash fifty cents a night

Met some guys from the delta
That played the blues
Spent most my days moving from corner to corner
Made enough to get by on
My friends and I started playing together

Things were going great
Till the police ran us out of the park
We saw a sign outside a juke joint
Band needed… fifty dollars a night
Went inside and started to play

Owner said you’ll do be here at nine o’clock
Showed up that night
The place was packed wall to wall
Took the stage started playing the blues
Had a few drinks just to loosen up

The crowd really liked our music
Night after night we packed the house
Playing the blues delta style
Letting my soul bleed
Doing what I loved

A few weeks later met a lady I really liked
We got hitched on a Saturday night
News got around about our band
Soon offers came rolling in
Took a gig up town at a classy blues joint

The money was rolling in…everything was great
Came home early one night
Caught my wife with my best friend
Grabbed my guitar ran out the door
Headed South…ain’t going back to Chicago no more

Rolled into Memphis about four AM
Bought myself a bottle of gin
Spent the next day drinking and playing the blues
My head was aching…my heart was breaking
My soul was bleeding… the blues I was needin’

Heard about a place in Clarksdale, Mississippi
Thought I’d take a ride and check it out
Headed down hwy. 61 past the crossroads
Ground Zero Blues Club the sign said
Went inside…asked an old gray haired man if I could sit in

He said sure boy…show me what you got
Played a set took a break
That old gray haired man asked me
If I wanted to join his band
I said sure…I’ll do the best I can

You bleed the blues boy he said
That woman must have hurt you bad
One day you gonna be like me…an old gray haired man
Twenty years later that old man died
Now I’m that old gray haired man playing the blues

If you’re ever down South
Travel down hwy. 61 to Clarksdale, Mississippi
Ground Zero Blues Club still there
Come on in pull up a chair
Listen to that old gray haired man play the blues

Copyrighted 8-26-2020


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1 posted 2020-08-27 03:29 AM


Just wanna lean back in the chair, take a little sip, and ease the hat I don't wear down over my eyes while I listen to some music now.  You hit all the notes on this one.  Enjoyed.


Michael

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2 posted 2020-08-27 11:59 AM


Michael...Glad you liked this. Would love to join you for that sip, but make mine a Diet Coke. Thanks for reading and your reply...Paul

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3 posted 2020-08-27 12:15 PM


enjoyed this my friend - quite a tale and if this is/was you hope things are much better now.

easy now, blues man . . .

j.

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4 posted 2020-08-27 06:43 PM


James...Thanks very much for reading. This is just one of many fictional poems that could be real and most likely is for some Bluesmen. Thanks again my friend for reading and your reply...Paul

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5 posted 2020-08-27 07:24 PM


What a journey..you're going to have us
swaying & snapping our fingers 'Bluesman'.

Enjoyed the tale Poet Paul

Sky~

~ Cherish Everything ~

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6 posted 2020-08-27 09:15 PM


Ah, so glad to hear. Many of my writes (with some embellishments) also are fictional, but then again, they are as real as the sun is bright, because they all stem from something that tweaked my soul in one way or another, except for my writes about my Cancer, which are very real indeed.

Sorry to hear about your daughter, my friend. I may even have commented on something you said about it before now . . . but without looking it up . . . Cancer isn't so bad,
it's my memory thats hurts the worst.

Walk Easy . . .

j.

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7 posted 2020-08-27 10:56 PM


Sky...If you really want to hear very good live blues come on down to ground zero inm Clarksdale, Ms. I've never been but have watched some great blues from there  on our local public broadcast tv channel. Thanks so much for singing along with me...Paul

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8 posted 2020-08-27 11:01 PM


James...I really hope you keep getting positive results on your cancer. My heart is still heavy from the loss of my daughter, but I am coping with it and I know she is happy wherever she is. Thanks and keep strong.
Saying prayers for you my friend...Paul

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9 posted 2020-08-28 11:19 AM


“My head was aching…my heart was breaking
My soul was bleeding… the blues I was needin’”

What a wonderful journey you just took me on Paul. You had me smiling and humming my own tunes along throughout the adventure. Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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10 posted 2020-08-28 12:58 PM


Kit...Thanks very much for reading and your generous reply. So glad you liked that stanza, I think it makes the poem come to life...Paul

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11 posted 2020-08-28 06:50 PM


Hello Paul
Love the Blues!
What a delightful adventure you took me on
Very real to life feeling throughout
Much enjoyed & Thanks for sharing your grand imagination!
Alana

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12 posted 2020-08-28 08:30 PM


You weave the vision with such beauty and sadness...I have never understood the blues well but now I think I am getting it...hugs and prayers are sent your way...I loved this and could hear the music
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13 posted 2020-08-28 09:55 PM


Alana...So glad you love the blues. To me they are the life blood of music. They comfort you when you are down, sort of like therapy for the soul. Thank you so much for coming along with me on this journey...Paul

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14 posted 2020-08-28 10:01 PM


Karen...The blues can best be described if you listen to the music and words. Its like a lonely wolf looking for a mate when they howl and the singer is baring their soul to the audience So thankful for you reading and replying. I really hope you explore the blues more...Paul

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15 posted 2020-08-29 08:51 AM


Paul... "Its like a lonely wolf looking for a mate when they howl and the singer is baring their soul to the audience"...what a beautiful way to put it...I reread your poem and could see and feel it...amazing...time to explore something new in my life...thank you
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16 posted 2020-08-29 10:32 PM


Karen ...You are welcome...Paul
Do some internet searches on blues music and listen to some. Search Blues singers and pick one and kick back and enjoy

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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