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Marchmadness
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0 posted 2020-08-14 11:00 PM



Yesterdays...
reverberate
throughout the years
like an echo,
somewhat hollow
and far away,
and yet they dance
in the moonlight of life
to a song called Memory.

             Ida Werrett

© Copyright 2020 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
augustsky
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1 posted 2020-08-14 11:15 PM


Well..Your 'song' couldn't be anymore
Beautiful Ida.
This sits awhile..Gently.

Sky~

Sometimes..Miracles are just good people
with kind hearts~

Starmcneil 1955
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Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2020-08-15 08:33 AM


the music of your song brought sweet memories to mind...love the flow and feel of this poem
Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2020-08-15 10:50 AM


Ida...You sure can say the most lovely thoughful things with just a few words. Enjoyed very much...Paul

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Paul

Michael
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4 posted 2020-08-15 09:25 PM


Ida, yesterdays have a soft voice...a subtle whisper that ever calls to us, don't they?

Really enjoyed this.


Michael

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5 posted 2020-08-15 10:42 PM


They certainly do. Oh, I do love this!
2islander2
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6 posted 2020-08-20 07:21 PM


good reverberation, good sensations, loved that one Ida
yann

Starmcneil 1955
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7 posted 2020-08-21 08:03 PM


WOW and what a song it is...Yesterdays fill me sometimes
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
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So. El Monte, California
8 posted 2020-08-22 03:45 PM


Thank you, Poets, for your lovely comments.

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