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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
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0 posted 2020-08-09 06:33 PM


I can’t help but wonder-
If you ever think about me?
Recalling the good times,
When we were so young and so free.

The days when tomorrow
Was always wrapped up in today-
We danced with the Devil-
And sooner, or later, you pay.

I was a fool, girl-
I guess I will have to admit.
You were the smart one-
You knew when the time came to quit.

I’ve thought of you often-
As I watched my hair turning grey-
As I’m growing older,
There’s only one thing left to say…

We gave it a good run-
But you know the thing I find strange,
Could I do it over-
There’s not a thing I would change.


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Paul Wilson
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1 posted 2020-08-09 08:03 PM


John...Really liked this. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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2 posted 2020-08-10 11:17 AM


you really did live her, unforgettable


yann

  

Starmcneil 1955
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3 posted 2020-08-10 11:31 AM


Wonderful...I too would not change the past...it is for learning and growth...nor do I forget the fun...life is for living...your talent with words and feelings will always bring a smile to my face...well done my friend
Michael
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4 posted 2020-08-15 11:15 AM


When I look back I pretty much draw the same conclusions about not changing anything.  Maybe it's a Butterfly Effect type of awareness, that any change at all 90% or more of the time will end up negative...for me anyway.

Pleasant to read you again, Sir.  Missed ya.


Michael

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5 posted 2020-08-16 12:40 PM


I feel this way about some things. Others, not so much. This is sweet and lovely. Enjoyed.

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



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