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Starmcneil 1955
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0 posted 2020-08-04 12:03 PM


Reading Words

Reading words filled with emotions
the dark, the light filled with colors
Words that ring with true devotion
from hearts and minds of rare talent

With tears that flow from eyes that feel
the pains and agony of life
Writing is a balm that might heal
from scars laid bare for all to see

My heart cries for the pain endured
for the hurts not chosen of all
Hope burning in heart to be cured
of much that’s hidden deep within

Then my heart rejoices with light
from words that whisper there is hope
Follow the path to make things right
don’t let the darkness consume you

Your words help me to grow, mature
to release anger, fear, and pain
And know that light I can procure
on the path led by words sublime

Teaching I need not fear myself
to know feelings are a part of me
My soul is not on empty shelf
but goes on learning endlessly

(Inspired by the Poets at PIP)
Karen McNeil
2020


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Paul Wilson
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1 posted 2020-08-04 12:51 PM


Karen...Thanks so much for allowing us to share in this poem with you.
Writing can help many people that have almost lost all hope, It can help the heart and mind heal , I know from experience...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2020-08-04 02:17 PM


Karen,
Writing is just part of the way I function now. It has saved my sanity. Couldn't stop if I wanted to. ~L

2islander2
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3 posted 2020-08-04 08:42 PM


beaytifully written as an hommage to talented poets, words are precious for everyone, your poem touched me

have a nice day

yann

augustsky
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4 posted 2020-08-04 11:28 PM


Karen, We all help each other with our writing..just my thoughts..but I feel all of
us are broken a little in some way.
Your Poem was Lovely.

Sky~

Sometimes..Miracles are just good people
with kind hearts~

Starmcneil 1955
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Posts 174
Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2020-08-07 10:57 AM


Paul...I find writing brings to light feelings I didn't realized I had buried...thank you for your comment

Lori...I know just how you feel...writing holds me together and puts light in my soul...thank you for your comment

Yann...it seems every time I come here and read I become inspired by the words spoken from the heart...thank you for your comment

Sky...I agree we are all broken and the words we read and write seem to heal in their own way...so glad I came back...thank you for your comment

Michael
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6 posted 2020-08-08 02:40 PM


"Then my heart rejoices with light
from words that whisper there is hope"

I believe it is through sharing through words that we heal most effectively, Karen. You have captured this concept beautifully.  And the hope that comes of it.

Michael

Starmcneil 1955
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Alberta, Canada
7 posted 2020-08-10 11:50 AM


Michael...you are right...words do incredible amounts of healing for each of us...I know just writing the words gives me a feeling of relief...thank for your response
Temptress
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8 posted 2020-08-15 09:11 PM


This is lovely. You are an inspiration yourself. I'm finding great support and inspiration here as I always did. I wish I hadn't spent so many years away. Thank you.

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



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