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The Mourning Notes
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The Mourning Notes |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
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The Mourning Notes It gnaws at me, the mourning. enduring beyond it’s due It’s not my place to say, I guess (biased as I am and still in love) and yet the dreary songs drone on creeping through doors shut in defiance and defence each note a bitter dagger jealousy, loss, regret. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very beautiful poetry, mourning works with such subtle details and images , bravo |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
If you are at all like me, the best poetry comes of these notes. Michael |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
@2islander2. Appreciate the reply. I'm trying to find the beauty in everything these days. @Michael. Thanks for reading. It does seem that it's sometimes easier to draw upon those notes and themes. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful sad longing. I don't know if these are coming from life experiences, but some very touching poetry is happening. I don't know if anyone uses the library option anymore, but you're in mine. "How much is real? So much to question |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Mz, This made me think of 'mourning doves', & their haunting calls. Nicely done.. Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people |
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