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Marshalzu
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0 posted 2020-07-08 04:00 AM


Roof

Weather beaten and mossed
beak pecked and tossed
the corrugations
un
    du
la
    te

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Temptress
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1 posted 2020-07-08 03:38 PM


I haven't read one of these yet that I don't like. Lovely.

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



2islander2
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2 posted 2020-07-08 07:55 PM


exquisite poetry, sweet images,

yann

augustsky
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3 posted 2020-07-08 10:44 PM


All the detail right there..in one tiny
Wonderful package.

Enjoyed

Sky~

Sometimes..Miracles are just good people
with kind hearts~

Marshalzu
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4 posted 2020-07-09 05:03 AM


@Temptress. Thanks, feels good to be writing again.

@2islander2. Thanks for the reply. Appreciated

@augustsky. Thanks, sometimes it feels like working with postage stamp and trying to paint a landscape. Glad you enjoyed

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