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augustsky
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0 posted 2020-07-07 05:33 PM



Trio of Haiku's~

Footprints~


You left silent, as
feathered snow through birch trees, one
day I will follow

Tenderness~


Oh..such a treasured
commodity, served silky
smooth..chaser of love

Melody~

'Unforgiven' tune
strums my heart, stirs my essence,
vibrates my soul home

©Augustsky


Music from the movie "Unforgiven".'claudia's theme',
(one of my favorite piece's,
music to read Haikus by        

https://youtu.be/z5q5YP9kBuI

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Paul Wilson
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1 posted 2020-07-07 06:26 PM


Sky...Enjoyed very much your Haiku's.
Thanks for posting and sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

augustsky
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2 posted 2020-07-07 09:25 PM


Thank you Paul, you are always sweet & supportive.


Sky~

Sometimes..Miracles are just good people
with kind hearts~

Marshalzu
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3 posted 2020-07-08 03:55 AM


Such a beautiful trio of moments.
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4 posted 2020-07-08 07:59 PM


i love these three haikus, and poetical sensations
yann

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5 posted 2020-07-08 08:59 PM


Pay me no mind. I'm just passing by leaving a long trail of sighs. These are lovely.

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



augustsky
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6 posted 2020-07-08 10:49 PM


Thank you much Mz, yann, & Temptress for your
read & comments..Haiku's are fun & relaxing
for me.

Appreciate your thoughts Poet's..

Sky~

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7 posted 2020-07-10 01:27 AM


Loved all of these.

the "one day I will follow" line on your Footprints one really struck within me though.  It's hard to bring substance forth in a haiku.  You do it well, Sky.

Michael

augustsky
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8 posted 2020-07-10 10:17 PM


Thank you Michael, it seems you never quite
expect someone you love to just pass away so quick,so silently, (my thoughts anyway) I can't quite explain it..but that's what that verse meant.

Sky~

Sometimes..Miracles are just good people
with kind hearts~

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9 posted 2020-07-14 08:18 AM


very nice  view!!
augustsky
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10 posted 2020-07-15 08:07 PM


Charisma, Thanks for stopping by, pleased you liked.


Sky~

Sometimes..Miracles are just good people
with kind hearts~

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11 posted 2020-07-28 03:01 PM


These are absolutely lovely...sweet and filled with the heart...so much said in so few words

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