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Open Poetry #50

Upended

Forlorn Angel
Member
Posts 143

0 posted 2020-04-15 03:56 PM

Just forget about it
The world is upending and it just doesn't fit
Like my mind being hacked
Or maybe just my phone

I guess I'll never know

Nothing happened here
If nothing happened then nothing happened so they think it's not real

Point blank memories
Of fighting tyranny's
Like the ultimate ultimatum
As they sell their freedom

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

1 posted 2020-04-15 07:50 PM

Forlorn Angel...Welcome to Passions in case no ones welcomed you yet. Not sure if I get your meaning with this poem, but it does have me thinking and scratching my head. If I come up with something I will let you know...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Forlorn Angel
Member
Posts 143

2 posted 2020-09-07 01:39 AM

Thank you for your response and my apologies for the late reply. I will definitely be getting around here more often.

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

3 posted 2020-10-02 07:57 PM

Sounds like the current state of things..
so very 'Upended'.

sky~

~Tell me the story about how the sun
loved the moon so much..he died every
night to let her breathe~

Forlorn Angel
Member
Posts 143

4 posted 2020-10-29 01:57 PM

yes and inside out and backwards.

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