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Paul Wilson
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The Awakening
By Paul Wilson

I’ve been inside the lights of the North
As they turn from green to red and purple
While sitting on the apex of the moon
Watching the Sun rise in the East
As it sets in the West
The Earth stood still as time froze
Within the vision of my mind

Stars guide me thru eternity
Along the highway of my soul
Leading me to the deepest recesses of my mind
Where never before seen visions greet me
In a place where the elders reside
Heart is pounding as I close my eyes
Trying to block out visions within my mind

Below I see all that was and all that I know
The Sun and Moon circle each other like before
Stars light pathway thru the sky
On this journey the sands of time stand still
Return to the past or venture into the future
The choice mine to make… { or is it }
Time is running out my journey will soon end

Go forth become one with the teacher
Or return to where I came from
Back thru the lights of the North
Below the Sun and Moon
Back to the time of my mortality
Never to explore visions in my mind
Unable to comprehend that which is out there

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~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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Michael
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1 posted 2020-02-07 11:44 AM


Some beautiful imagery here, Paul.  I cannot be sure your meanings here, but I had a near death experience quite a few years back that painted some similar imagery in my mind...along with the choice.  You took me back there with this.
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2 posted 2020-02-07 02:52 PM


Michael...Your perception of this poem is right on. I also had a near death experience back around 1970 -71 where my spirit was up in the clouds looking down at my human body and realizing how stupid I was and all the wrong things I'd done in my life and it was like I was given a second chance.
Thanks for reading my friend and understanding...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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