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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2020-01-11 02:58 AM



I would write about
our great romance.
Things like:
The first time
you asked me to dance,
That first kiss,
"Our song,"
The way you broke my heart
when it all went wrong.
I would write about
the one I can't forget...
had we met.

                Ida Werrett

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Michael
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1 posted 2020-01-11 09:26 AM


Ah, starting the day with wistful yearnings.  Yawn, stretch...and a sigh.

Good morning, Ida.

Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2020-01-11 12:08 PM


Ida..., If you ever meet him he better not break your heart, I will put him in his place, The Hospital. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2020-01-12 03:50 AM


Thank you, Gentlemen. Good morning, Michael.
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2020-01-13 02:39 AM


Ah, MM, The possibilities existing in dreams far outweigh the necessity of reality but sometimes provide comfort for inner peace.
Very nicely done!
Eric

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2020-02-14 04:15 AM


Thank you, Eric.

Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
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6 posted 2020-06-05 08:19 PM


I've known a few "what if" people in my life. Thinking about what life would be like with a person you didn't get to meet makes for some great daydreaming.  Love this.


"Maybe that's the way I should go
Straight into the mouth of the unknown"

Shinedown

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
7 posted 2020-06-07 11:28 AM


what a moving poem, Ida, true color of love
yann

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